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What Could've Been - Part I reviews

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Posted by liz

um... i'm a little turned off by lack of formatting, but at least u have the right idea story-wise. it just gets slightly confusing.

Posted by Danny

Hi BDJ,,, love the story ,,,

Posted by weirdo

it's not the story it's the lack of format, you just need to put it into paragraphs so it's easier to read then a big blob.

Posted by CG

love the story just hard to follow please continue

Posted by KATE

i like tha way things are turning out so pls. write tha next story soon

Posted by Christin

There needs to be a part 2 to this!I can soo go with this story b/c I am in a similar situation right now.

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