What Could've Been - Part I reviews
um... i'm a little turned off by lack of formatting, but at least u have the right idea story-wise. it just gets slightly confusing.
Hi BDJ,,, love the story ,,,
it's not the story it's the lack of format, you just need to put it into paragraphs so it's easier to read then a big blob.
love the story just hard to follow please continue
i like tha way things are turning out so pls. write tha next story soon
There needs to be a part 2 to this!I can soo go with this story b/c I am in a similar situation right now.
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He stood above me and looked at me in disbelief. I was still wearing my boots, I asked him if I should remove them, he said no, he liked the look of me in my school-girl skirt and boots without a shirt on. He slowly set himself on top of me, running his hands from my thighs up to my chest... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting