Wanting her son-n-law!!! reviews
The story started out slow, but picked up!! I could see how this might be real, but I think it's just made up. Nice concept. Keep writing.
You need to break up those long paragraphs. Think about readability. Maybe too much was happening in such a short piece. I think it's all fiction too.
i alwasy cry for this fun
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New immigrants Maria and Guadalupe have been sent from Mexico because too many boys have been sniffing around them. They HAVE to keep their jobs and stay virgins for their father... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting