He is a bastard for cheating, but she sounds like a bitch for ignoring him. Of course, his attitude is disturbed, but so is hers. They are both idiots. I don't like anyone in this story. She shouldn't have to do everything for him, but she shouldn't ignore him either.
Posted by SEVERUSMAX
Actually, correct that. His definition of attention seems like my girlfriend's ex's definition: like she said, mothering him. Damn! I just reread it and had to correct myself. Hate having to do that! Oh, well, he is obviously a slob. She won't do it, so he leaves the house disheveled and accuses her of not "resembling a wife"! Asshole! Don't think he needs training- he needs to be left and have to reflect on his life.
Posted by SEVERUSMAX
Thinking about it all over again, and discussing it further with someone special, her behavior is not right. No, she shouldn't wait on him hand and foot, but she can do more than she has. Her laziness is not excusable, so she is hardly the sympathetic victim here. As for the cheating, that's wrong- unless she has also been too to spread her legs for him.
Posted by Brudha
Good start. I was anticipating the discipline and punishment of husband...maybe multiple husbands, serving all the ladies.
Posted by Samantha
this was so great, i want more story. how did the women make ronn pay? fucking hot. a real winner.