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Vashka: Demon Protector reviews

Posted by The Author - Rayne
I apologize. I meant for this story and part II to be released at the same time. I hope this builds you up and holds you over for the real installment.
Posted by huh?
wheres the rest of it?
Posted by Huh?
no it does not as you did not do alot of it. When you beuild a story up you need to do it well or make the reader mad when you end it like that.
Posted by The Author - Rayne
didn't i put here that I thought part II would be released at the same time. Also I can't modify the story so I'm kinda screwed. The next one is soooo much better. trust me. I don't know why I only did half the first part. I'm sorry.
Posted by wildkitten
I can't wait for the rest of the story.
Posted by cory
i liked what i read but you need to finish this great story.
Posted by Rayne - the author
Part II is out. Please read and tell me what you like. Please, it should be really really good. everytime I read it I'm hot and bothered.
Posted by riki
the story is good so far but plz right more i want 2 know wat happens
Posted by Melanie
Hey I love this story. please write more
Posted by Renee
Where the hell is the rest of the story!!!!
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