Travis finally gets his fantasy reviews

dude... this sucks... try using some punctuation...

this is actually the worst story i've ever read. what grade are you in?-_-

THIS has to be The Best Story I have ever read SO what if the grammer and stuff was bad i dont read it for the grammer ..... i doubt you people read it for the grammer.... WHO says a story has to be realistic ???? I really Loved this story

other then the grammer and the punctuation the story was fucking posh

very good i thought, although prolly could use some more detail in places, and seems a bit rushed in places