The twins reviews
Sorry, this story just does not cut it as an incest tale. It is more of a freak show, and an improbabl one at that. Then there are the spelling, grammar, etc problems... Try to clean things up for the next part.
Personally, the freak show thing I liked. It was just waaay too short and nondescript. View some of the top submitters for incest if you want to have a really good story.
this was pretty awful, it coulda been good, if you woulda put some time into it, not just: "Hey! lets fuck!" "Ok!" I think you outta go back to the drawing board for your next story.
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I call you on the phone and tell u I will be their in 30 minutes. I can hear the excitement in your voices and can't help but smile at the thought of what tonight could bring to us. I hear you getting ready over the phone and tell u I will talk to you when I get their love... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting