The Long Ride Home reviews

the story was extremely hot and so am i

Good work.

really good at least a 9

Really greath story I really enjoyed it. I hope to hear mroe of it soon.

It was really good. but i think you should have put in a little more build up to them fucking. and i agree you should deffinetly have it continue. It would be really good if you go the mom involved with it like three some or they have to hide it from her. And a word of advice in the next one if there is a next one make it more like they think its still taboo but they do it any way

Good work. It's all about turning on the reader. Which you did.

Christie's right, let the whole family in on the fun- don't exclude either parent.