I LOVED this story!!!!!!!!!It was the greatest I have ever heard, except for the Baby Island one. The only suggestion I have it to make it longer. Anyways, This story is the BOMB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Everybody should read it.
Posted by Samantha
i loved your story it was so long thats what i liked about it please make a next one please
Posted by Mike Oxbig
DUDE! Chicks jack-off to porn
Posted by fuji
this story was great!!!!!!! the length didn't bother me at all. if you are not a writer by proffesion mrwizard you should really consider it. thanx alot!!!
Posted by unknown
hottest fucking story i have ever read my pussy was drippoing from start to finish. can't wait to read more. i like that it was long it juist krpt be waiting to read about the next fuck next time try fuckung them in the ass also' or if they had a brother have the father fuck him aling with his sisters
Posted by Angel
Outstanding this was the best story ever. Defiante NOT too long. I wish it was longer. I too would love a series to contine. WOW !
Posted by jay
thr stormor good life love to john,best of both worlds. GREAI.
Posted by none
BEST STORY EVER!!! CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!
Posted by Alex
super story!!! I love it! please write more. What happens when they get back to the city? Do the girls have any friends that would share in their experiance? MORE,MORE!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Linda Swiss
Your story made me so hot that, after finger-fucking my hot little pussy, I came so hard that I fainted.
Posted by Teppo
i swear my wad shot 5 ft awat from me, This wa sthe few stores that could get me to do that. I gotta cehck your other stuff man...
Posted by Capn
The only thing is, you should have him cum in Missy. That was the only problem. Other than that, it was bad ass.
Posted by carol
very sexy story...made by pussy wet...now i gotta go touch myself!!!!
Posted by NeedsDiscipline
so great definitely one of my all time faves the length is great would only wnat it to be longer if anything. hope to see you continue the story line.
Posted by SEVERUSMAX
Wonderful, but definitely add anal if there is any sequel! Definitely get both girls pregnant by him, too!