The Game ... First Time Sex: Part 13 - Paid in Full reviews

wow guys Thanks for the quick emails. "M" will do. Anyone who emails, I never mass email, so its all anonymous. School is starting, and I have so much to write! Also, "Marcus" was here all weekend and I didn't get a thing done, hehe.

I think I know where you guys spent New Year's. This story really excites me and can't wait for more. Kepp it up.

Ohmygosh, audio? LOL, We aren't that loud, hehe. Seriously, thanks a million for the feedback. Thanks for reading.

Started reading it a few weeks ago and slowly read it and finally caught up, and i love them, keep it up. I wouldnt mind if you caught up to the present, but dont rush, its been amazing so far. And im pretty sure itll be worth the wait

Hey Zunair, Any lady that wants to be completely satisfied should leave Pakistan for a country where men respect their woman and don't treat them like 2nd class citizens. That is the last place I would look for a man!

Joe! Thanks. Knowing that you enjoy the stories is one of my prime motivations for continuing. As I said above, the previous stories have been re-edited to correct numerous errors, and like a director's cut on DVD, I have added a little more details and clarifications. I may resubmit them in the future with a slightly different name in the title so they won't get mixed up with the originals. I've learned a lot since I started writing the story. Hope you have time to reread them.

Hello Ginger, I understand your concern, but there are a lot of guys in Pakistan who respect women. Each person should be judged apart from the others.

Update: There are now 20 chapters and more are coming.

nice and refreshing but a bit of typo's in the text....

Thanks Nova! I apologized for the typos on another review, but once again, thanks for overlooking the errors! I don't have an editor, hehe. My English teacher would have a fit.