The Challenge reviews

Great story, if only i went on that type of summer camp!

one of the best i've ever read. awesome!

sweet!!! got me off twice! good work!

Long, but interesting and well structured. The story was detailed and very in-depth. what I mean is, my girlfriend and I wanked all the way through it!Hehe! It was great! Thank you! Thank you so much!

Great story one of the best on the site. You should definitely make a part 2. The type of writing you do its no centered around anything its just not all about sex not all about detail it really good please please make a part 2 i will be looking foward to it.

I didny really like i like THe one with ruby the babysitter and tommy!!

dude this story rocks

I DEFINITLY ENJOYED THIS STORY AND YOU DEFINITLY NEED TO MAKE A PART 2 MAYBE EVEN 3 AS JARED GETS MORE EXPERIENCE IN HIS LITTLE TOWN.

Fantastic! The sex was great, and the storyline was excellent too. You really should write part 2, and devolop both Jared and Valeries characters. Keep up the good work!

One of the best stories I've seen on this site! Great writing with good background, not all about the sex scenes but a truly good all around story.

really good porn story..very hot

wut about the counselers..? he should fuck them more..

Great story, you should definately write more.

simply gr8 !!!!!!!!!!

very hot......

good story but you need a part 2 where Jared has sex agian with val and the other girls he had sex with as well

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