The Bet 3 - Bleed for Me reviews

I think this may be the best damn thing you have ever written

Not as long as i am writing it.

dammit. come on and try SOME optimism!

well done

I love the comedy you use in this. Some parts im laughing, others i am getting teary eyed over. Im confused about where exactly the story is going right now, but i am sure youve got it all planned out. Ive read almost all your work and i must say, there isnt a whole lot of it i dont like. So, youve gotta keep going girl!

I have another comment as well. What exactly is it you mean when you say "telling us instead of showing us?" The whole story has been written the same way from day one - Rachel's perspective. I never narrarated it. It has always been what is going on through Rachel. Its about what Rachel does, sees and feels. The only thing that was different was the 2nd installment about Monica and her feelings for Rachel.

do you realize that the story is NOT DONE?

Well, you're implying that i have not brought out the love and passion between Monica and Rachel. That has everything to do with the fact that i'm not done.

write more. i like themm there not just sex theirs a story with emotion.

Grrrr....when is the 4th cummn out...Damn it man i check like every week...

errr...when is this place gonna update itself..been waiting forever for new stories.

write the rest

The fiancee should come out of the closet, she is clearly a lesbian, and she shouldn't waist her fiance's time and efforts trying to get a Sappho into the sack.

I meant "waste".

Where is the 4th???? Been waiting forever.

still waiting for the 4th!!

How long till the 4th chapter comes out? Been waiting for the longest time. This is a great series.

What the? Did you forget to continue this one?

Still waiting for the fourth, this is an awesome series, you can't just leave us hanging like this!!!!!

i've log on every day to see if the 4th have come out.and heaven's sake,it's been 2-3 months!so ,unless the author suddenly drop dead,i hope she can come n finish this story.it's a pure torture waiting,so pls i'm on my knees,finish this story

I can't find it! HELP!!!

do u have a link to were the fourth part can be located cus i've tried to locate it and i'm not getting luck

Your stories is all over the place it be nice to be able to follow it.