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Some first times should happen all the fucking time reviews

Posted by Heywood Jablomee
I gave up half way through. Try sticking to one topic and stop wandering off with all the tangents. Even your reply to someone else's review was way too wordy. Cut to the chase and just write your story. Should you be descriptive? Yes... but this was WAY too much. Better luck next time.
Posted by blondy
this story sucks! what a waste of my time.
Posted by Jess
I too gave up after reading the first few paragraphs. You really should just get to the point, and not go on a long tangent on how nice this womens breasts looked.
Posted by sriraaam
hai
Posted by Lee
Stupid
Posted by ROBERT BURGESS
LOUSY STORY DID NOT LIKE IT AT ALL
Posted by Risika
Don't listen to them. Your story was absolutely divine and I look forward to reading more of your work. There needs to be more people who can seduce with words alone.
Posted by Hilarious
Great story. didn't get me off, but was entertaining.
Posted by Bob
Wtf
Posted by Christina
VDuLDA Cool! That's a clever way of looking at it!
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