Sitting on a picnic table in the park reviews
tremndously done
This is a short story not a Poem. Your grammer was very poor. You went from voice one then to voice two. Then back to voice one. For a short story this piece was fair, as a Poem, it was less then fair.
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my mom was shocked so was aunt....thats wen my aunt saw me holding my cock. she came towards me and took my cock in her hand and led me towards the bed... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting