Sitting on a picnic table in the park reviews
tremndously done
This is a short story not a Poem. Your grammer was very poor. You went from voice one then to voice two. Then back to voice one. For a short story this piece was fair, as a Poem, it was less then fair.
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How a daughters boy friend turns her mother into a slut... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting