Sharing Black The Ultimate Betrayal (The Uncut Version) part 2 reviews

you have mad talent shyblou keep up the good work. looking forward to part three, by the way when it that coming out?

superb!

hot little teen story! you sure know how to bring back memories, and how teenagers think.

Superb! Long, but superb! I think I aught to read all of them.

I can't wait to read more UNCUT versions of your stories. Greatest by far!

My next installment is about how life between Lajoria and Black change. Then I will write about Black's mother-in-law. Hope you all like them.

I like the Black versions better but they all were good. Keep on writing, and I'll keep on reading!

I love your stories, I'll keep looking for newer ones!

too good to be true!

to sum it all up in a nut shell i liked this story and can't wait for the next installment of it.

GREAT!

I hope to read the next installment soon, Great story!

two thumbs up!

Let me start by sayin that u have a talent that most ppl that write on this sight only wish 2 have. U had me from start 2 finish! I loved this story so much i had to let all my peeps read it! Even my teacher couldnt put it down! And your a young female! That was a shock 2. Im from da ghetto and that was a week on my block. Keep doin yo thang grl! FUCK DA HATERS! Ill b waitin 4 da book. Whats the name gonna b?

i like how ur stories are well outline and detail

Damn this was a long mutha fuckin' story, but well worth the read. You must be straight from da ghetto! Great story!!! When's the other ones coming out?

The sex scenes could've been better but a good story line! Shorten it next time gosh!

wtf!!!

Someone told me to read this story and I did. Damn it was too long... It was good but too damn long!

I would like to meet Black, he sounds like my kind of guy!!

this story was great

Thank you for the good writeup. It in fact was a amusement account it. Look advanced to more added agreeable from you! However, how could we communicate?

Okay I'm codvnicen. Let's put it to action.