Sex with a my best friend reviews

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it could have been a good story. it needs more detail. you moved a little too quickly to capture the interest of the reader. also watch wording. as an example: "he asked if i wanted him put" what is put? don't be discouraged by this. you can write a good story.

You should build up the story, try to get the reader to connect with the characters. It was good for a 1st try, looking forward to pt2

Very good story. Yes I would like another story but a little longer