Ruby baby sits reviews

ummmmmm im sorry that was the worst story i ever read, wehre is the story line? its all part by part, tommy hated babysitters, ruby went to bed, i mean c'mon you have to HAVE to be more creative then that??? plus this story was wayyy to short

very good story if you write more you wil soon have more polish. just keep up the good work

That was quick but hot, I always wanted to have a babysitter that would do that with me... but never really got babysat as far as I remember...

i liked it should write part 2 soon