Pay up time reviews
Apparently the writer did not bother editing her work at all -- the result a poor story.
The story had a good plot etc...as far as I know. I couldn't get through the whole story because there weren't any qoutation marks etc. I had to read lines over and over again to realise who was speaking. You need some lessons in story writing and editing.
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My summer vacation in Sweden and I get ganged up on by both my Aunts... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting