Oh Papi... reviews

very descritive, I loved it, made me very wet and horny, I think you could add to it, um, be very creative, maybe a threesome or anal sex, but its very good, I love it, 5 stars lol

to short but otherwise very good, i would love to see her mom get into it ^-^

Nice Story, it is nicely described in full detail and significant information is given in the reading!

Where does Diana live? If she got pregnant and you don't marry her, let me know so I can go and care for her?

To Saddam Hussein... hey dumbass... this is a sex story site... if it makes you sick... what the fuck are you doing in here... and for your information "Pedophile" is liking little boys, not having fun with young pussy...

i want more nd more stories like this one such a erotic story i just love it.

Guys, it's fiction...calm.

fucker dat was not good

Are you going to write the part where her mother finds out and she calls the cops and they come and arrest you? Then you can write about how you went to prison and the bull-queers fucked you in the ass.

nice story i like the "papi" shit was funny it was kinda like rape though but other than that it was a very nice story if u havent u should write more

I thought the sstory was written very well, and as for people like Saddam and Been there, if you guys are just gonna sit here and write how sick this was? why did you read it? these reviews are for either praising the story itself or constructive criticizm, but you idiots are sitting here whinin about age, go read a different story you MORONS! and as for yo ashutosh, go back to 3rd grade and se real grammer and real spelling, and f you are gooing to say his story was not good, at least make it constructive and say why it wasnt good and if its because of the age, you will simply be laughed at, just like the other doofuses

it made me so horny that my vag was quivering

cool story

to horny bitch i wish i was there to help you out

Its mad mad mad world so dont care any body but really the story is like that of heavenly pleasure. That story is not just any story which fails one to compell crave for immediate sex. I cant explain better cos my one hand is busy satisfying my sexual needs, pl tell which hand? Ha ha ha

fuck you

im gay someone plz suck me this story is gross i want it in the ass

guys chillax its a story thqts probly not true so stop sayin its ewwy and stop hating

michael shut the fuck up u fat cunt that has to read pedo storys because he cant get som in rael life

Hey, good to find someone who ageres with me. GMTA.

Ya learn something new eervdyay. It's true I guess!

Oh god this made me soooo fuckin wet im going to finger myself right now!!!!!

is this a true story good one.

wtf dudeeeeeee she 14

UMMMMMM IM WET PAPI

good girl suck that cock good then take it in your tight 14 yr old pussy, if I was daddy I would have fucked you long ago