meh. it was my first story of this nature, i didn't even set out to do it like this, it just came out like this. besides, i wouldn't figure that girls would like it, it's more for the guys.
Posted by Gilmuriel Dragonbane
it wasn't supposed to be about the dialogue.....
Posted by MeSelf
Nice job!
Posted by Tennion
I though it ras pretty good. Nice scenes, but it started to die down a bit toward the end
Posted by blimblamblom
i thought it was fine mate
Posted by Lynn
I liked it!!
Posted by Gilmuriel Dragonbane
ooooook....that was unnecessary, i never claimed to be Hemingway, and it's not as if i am crying because a few people didnt like it, they can kiss my ass if they don't. so there.
Posted by I Luv Pussy
Fuck off people, I thought it was great. Didn't think this had to be award winning material anyway. It's meant to get people horny, which I am, so I have an appointment with my vibe right now.
Posted by hate this story
yeah and your name says it all !
Posted by Danny
I liked it, it's just right
Posted by fan of the work
i came hard... thats what matters
Posted by Steam Heat
I thought it was very erotic and stimulating. Which IMO is the point of a site called "Sex Stories", not "Angsty Lesbian Romance with Literary Pretentions". I'm sorry to see that you seem to have been chased off by reviews enforcing an IMO inappropriate standard. Personally, I'd love it if you wrote more stories.
Posted by clit sucker
It was great, just kinda stopped suddenly.
Posted by (none)
I really liked it and i'm looking forward to the sequel.
Posted by candace
cool
Posted by Ashley
i thought it was hptt as fuck. i havent fucked a girl in almost 4 years so this story got me so damn wet
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