Night on the town reviews
You rushed through another one! Split up those big paragraphs. Add more detail and some dialogue.
Luke, I will take my time with the next one. I will reread it then take it all in. I will, I promise.
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Both collapsed onto back down onto the bed and slowing and passionately kissed one another before drifting off to sleep, still naked and covered in sweat from their escapade. You can imagine what happened when we woke up like that in the morning... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting