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My girlfirend's Secret. reviews

Posted by LucOuarm
This story really has too many grammar and organization problems. The dialogue needs better treatment. Not bad for a first effort, but I suggest next time you look your story over before submitting it.
Posted by J E Martin
This story is cool!!!
Posted by khghg
i loved it i had an orgasum.
Posted by jason
that is super hot, but i hope my girlfriend never EVER does that
Posted by Michael
i wanna a fuckin' friend anyone here?
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Annie is my best friend and tonight, I'm going to let my boyfriend brrak her into cocks! I figured she would learn better from an older guy! God!! I'm wet just writing this!!

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