My first time reviews

cute story maybe write a part 2 just a thought. But you never said what you or your bf look like

not good

very bad

I couldn't get through the first paragraph. The story may be good but the grammar and spelling were so bad I couldn't finish the first paragraph. Find someone who can write and have them help you write the story properly.

changed names of the boy half-way through from Mike to Tommy. Very poor use of the language...choppy.

These picees really set a standard in the industry.

i bolong to pakistan and i am 25 year old i want to mariage europen girls

Myself va s ant sak ri loved one girl gee th a she was so good her womb was big and hole was deeply my pen is gone inside slowly i kissed her pus sy put my tongue inside uterus and water was so salty taste i liked and then went to university college evening at dha r wad she took my pen is suck more deeply and my water flowing more deeply and my sister who greatly sacrifice for me i was above to die my mama also who loved me more given strength so today i am happy to live my sister who done so much i cannot express myself my sister i love more she is white fair and her pus sy slow and small tiny thing balls like tiny but she supported me still my life i cannot forget my sister and mama who love you more in front gee th a is zero front of my sister love to me my mama has small pen is he is faster than me in f u c k ing and myself slowly i love my sister i always advise my sister to remove hair dont keep my loving sister who done so many thing in real life thank god for my sister and mama

Myself love more sister myself love her in deeply pus sy myself love is greater than her she is my everything i am not interested to marry myself want to stay in her house and enjoy but now days sister became little far from me i am became so help less nobody is there but mama is there and sister who take care and full fill my life sister must come back how she was before in my life i am so much sad sister your also leaving me why so pls sorry any wrong thing happen pls come into new life how you were when i come from bang a lor e i love yo i miss yo more

Myself really stories happen in my life i was above to became father i had been gone for training i feel love to one girl and had deeply sex with her she was very good and smart looking myself staying in dh ar wad

Myself had sex in morning i want girl urine to wash my penis i want sexy looking girl at nigh t and more in bath time i had sex with one servant who work in our hotel a k sh a y at mi r a j what sexy she was even my wife nothing in front of them i had more experience in my life i had totally sexy and now her son became manager in my hotel my name muralidhar bha t

I HAD SEX AT MORNING ONLY WHICH IS FRESH HOT URINE COMES ITS FEEL GOOD TO WASH HER PRIVATE PARTS I WAS HAPPY TO DO MY GIRL HAD TO CALL TO WASH WOMB AND I WAS WASHING HER MY LIFE TURNED INTO NEW LIFE I WAS HAVING Sex MORE EVERY TIME SHE GOES OUT I HAVE TO KISS HER PARTS IF YOU LOVE WIFE YOU MUST DO IT

I had sex in all time in my life but i was not enough so i got sexy girl in my life i had once called her but she was so beautiful that i could not express in my life i was having slowly open her bra and slowly she pulled my cock and put into her juicy private part i was above to do my mil k came out so she said yo dont have capacity so i took medicine once and started having she shouted so much i did so much badly she came to me near daily without fail my loving girl she had became big hole in her life she was from d ha r wad she have to work in s d m enginering college now myself happy in my life she also phone me always call even her husband is there but she want mine beautiful cock for the night i love her more in my life she is great to come in my life i open her uterus and put inside even her period time also she is one who loved most my cock always waiting for her still my life end god bless her more and give healthy i was happy more to see in my life

Once upon a time there was heavy rain coming i was seating out side one of girl came to me said sir i want to became very pls remove your cock i was shocked by hearing because no girl say directly i was happy inside my heart she catch mine i told wait i went brought horse and put pen i s inside her horse was very lucky to see her pus sy its made so hot that pus sy came out water fast and put little on my cock also its started standing heavily i was put inside her womb and both fu ak de her but she was feeling hot more her urine was so good no smell at all its was pure water i drank one glass

My name all of the world know i play cricket more in indian team i had sex with film actress my best girl was k a j o l she had come to me and put her balls on my pen is and played more time i had to need daily first sex and other

Gud story.nid more pliz

I'm imprsseed! You've managed the almost impossible.

Smack-dab what I was lokoing for-ty!