My first fraternity formal reviews

Great story, romantic, good build up, great sex. You could have taken a bit longer describing the undressing of each other, The lacy thong was nice but more detail would be good

Thanks steveO. It was my first story, so I'll remember you're advice for the next one...

your instead of you're... sorry for the temporary lapse in english skills

I SUPER wanted a girl when I was pernnagt with my first, and I had my daughter, so I was thrilled. This time, I truly do not care. I mean the first time, I wanted a healthy baby, preferred a girl, but would have loved a boy as well. This time I truly have no preference at all. I would love another daughter and I would love to have a son as well.

You can certainly see your enthusiasm in the work you write. The world hopes for more passionate writers like you who are not afraid to say how they believe. Always follow your heart.