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I have never had the pleasure of reading any of your other stories, if there are any that is, but I must say that so far this one has deffinately gotten my attention. The only small problem I see is some of your grammer. Spell check is all well and good, however, it doesn't deferrentiate to, two, or too. Spell check will see that it is gramtically correct in spelling, but can't see it in it's use. You may want to have someone check your writing prior to submission, as I said though, this is a well written story and I really do hope to see more of your work in the future.

They stood watching the crane. He was looking at Francisco. What was my full intention? The same element was missing. He did not smile and he did not answer. I had nothing to do with it! This is the only establishment left. Hugh Akston was a distinguished man, a great mind .

He grabbed her shoulders in a punishing grip and hauled her back onto his cock. Given that theyd once been lovers, he would be more in tune to her feelings. Most commonly, those who were truemated fell in love, sometimes instantly sometimes it took centuries. Arkir grabbed for Lanthan and managed to keep his hold as the smaller man twisted. But she wasnt lashing out. It was so different, this control. Startled from her thoughts, she glanced up at him. His warmth swallowed her as he shouted his pleasure above her. She clung to him, wordless in the flood of emotion that took her. What was that swelling feeling deep inside her chest? Angrily, she dashed tears from her eyes, stepping toward the outer door. She stepped back again. She froze, lost in the icy heat of his gaze. What they had this moment was less, but also so much more. But it dawned on her the he he meant was Radin. He rolled his hips into her, taking his time in building toward climax. He shook his head, stepping farther into the room. That, and you havent asked to talk to me alone before. He mirrored her hold on his neck, squeezing her nape. Even if he had, she would have been his.

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