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Making the Chef Pay reviews

Posted by Jenna
I just thought it would be good to mention to you and the readers how much your stories make me cum.All of your stories are amazing it's nice to see a person with such great talent.The stories are very erotic. I love a man who takes control.I also fantasy about rape and domination.I would love to see more of your stories Powerone.
Posted by NeedsDiscipline
I totally agree with Jenna. A man taking control there's just nothing better
Posted by Derek
you nasty sluts can't get enough dick.Nasty whores love cum don't you?I want to meet you both and show you how much i will beat you and fuck you.I won't even let you cum nasty pigs.
Posted by Derek
you nasty sluts can't get enough dick.Nasty whores love cum don't you?I want to meet you both and show you how much i will beat you and fuck you.I won't even let you cum. nasty pigs.
Posted by jackie
very good...you should make another one
Posted by Jessica
great story cant wait for the continuation of it
Posted by kotiwala
this is disgusting.you guys should be hang and whipped naked in public.don't you americans have anything else to do?
Posted by Powerone The Author of the Story
In response to Lotiwala, actually this story like I said in the beginning, is about a Canadian, not an American, in real life.
Posted by iam an illusion
I believe one must be disciplined in all areas of their lives prior to being disciplined. Dont you agree needsdiscipline?
Posted by Niki
Finish the Story! You must finish it! I love this story and I am just dying for a continuation!
Posted by Masta's Angel
Heres a simple solution.. if you don't like the theme.. don't read the story. No one is forcing you to sit down and read them =P I personally love all of Powerones stories. He has a great eye for detail and best of all.. it's not partially broken english, it's got good grammar and you can actually understand what he's trying to stay. Keep up the good work, in my personal opnion the best thing about these stories is he gives a background to the characters, and a excellent story line =]
Posted by Pamela
Wow, I'm already drenched with all the cum in my panties! My little pussy is just purring like crazy. Mmm I'm going to go shove a big fat dildo up my tiny cunt.
Posted by QueenP
Omg, i could feel her pain but i fucking loved it!!! I was wet b4 i even finished reading! xD
Posted by True Blood DVD
I was curious if you ever considered changing the layout of your website? Its very well written; I love what youve got to say. But maybe you could a little more in the way of content so people could connect with it better. Youve got an awful lot of text for only having one or 2 pictures. Maybe you could space it out better?
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