London : The sequel reviews

wow...that story was really good...

great story.. you described yourself well, but poor old alex was left only to our imagination. was he cute? nice body? what kind of eyes, mouth etc. we know what you wore but would like to know what he wore too? what did he look like naked?

This story wasn't bad. I have read better, but still got me hot. Also you don't need to tell us u are gonna be descriptive...just do it.

Great writing,very real,keep up the good work

I felt like your last line was very accusatory. You jumped on the reader and told them they'd better like it or there was something wrong with them :p but overall, I liked it well enough.