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Posted by Allenby
Good one, do a follow up.
Posted by L
I really like this one. I'm a bit of a romantic. This one really got to me, make them longer next time.. great job.
Posted by Alex
yeah that was good id enjoy a follow up, nice job!
Posted by Andrew
This is a very good story, You should do a follow up of it.
Posted by ck
Write a Part 2 please...it's a good story line...
Posted by jaxs
I loved your story! it is great i would love a part 2
Posted by Jeffrey O
I thought it was just ok. No need for a part 2 unless you add her sister or the football team to the mix.
Posted by ya-ya
this is a great story.do a follow up
Posted by Allenby
To Jeffrey O: If she adds up the footbal team she should add your mother too - to give them all blow jobs...
Posted by Roxann
GREAT STORY!.....Keep following it UP...I want MORE
Posted by Steve
that was awsome. my girl friend and i got really horney with that thought that it was really good go for part 2.
Posted by Not so Innocent
You need to do part 2....Please!!!
Posted by MZ
nice`
Posted by josh
that was nice. you should do a part 2. the two of them exploring their sexuality for the first time/
Posted by Sara
I really do think you should do a part 2. This story was amazing!!!
Posted by thunda
please do a part 2 to this story i really enjoyed it
Posted by Amy
i think u'r story was fantastic......waiting for more.
Posted by Daniel
Great story, your a good writer. Make a part 2 i love the storyline.
Posted by natasha
yes. oh my gawd yes. make a second one!!!!!
Posted by Penguin
Yes, do a sequel.
Posted by chris
awsome story make a make 2
Posted by David
you should do part 2. part 1 was good
Posted by sims
xxx
Posted by George
i came. twice. part two would be appreciated.
Posted by kim
yes i think you should make a part 2.
Posted by Tom
definetly edo a part 2!
Posted by k
yes def!
Posted by ANONOMOUS
YES You Should do Part2 that was great!!!
Posted by alyssa
yah that was a great story so i think that you should do a part 2
Posted by Leah
omg...my boyfriend and I love it. you should definitely do a part 2!!!
Posted by lena
hell yeah do part 2 i wanna know wat happens w/yall
Posted by Ketan
Do part 2..
Posted by jen
YES DO A PART TWO PLEASE!!!
Posted by Stacey
Luv it! Part 2 please!!!!
Posted by DVD Bxo set
Thanks for your write-up on the travel industry. I'd personally also like to include that if you are one senior thinking about traveling, its absolutely essential that you buy traveling insurance for retirees. When traveling, retirees are at high risk being in need of a healthcare emergency. Obtaining the right insurance policy package to your age group can look after your health and provide peace of mind.
Posted by Romina
Hekcvua good job. I sure appreciate it.
Posted by karioh
Part 2 please
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