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Lisa and Me -- Our First Time reviews

Posted by Rachael
this is one of the best stories that i have ever read!! You need to keep writing. The details and the choice of words were amazing!!!!! You have a real talent
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Posted by Samet
- Love these teasers alouthgh you probably have as many pictures in your teasers as some photographers have for the whole wedding! The portraits of the two of them in the park are great and I love how all the images seamlessly go together and tell a story. Great images and I am sure your clients are so happy!
Posted by Dima
For me, it really dpdnees on what the author sets up in advance, what the author leads me to expect I will find. There's romance, erotic romance, and erotica. Each one has different levels of heat. I'm okay with a romance that has no explicit sex. But there sure better be sex in an erotic romance!My expectations are built by the blurb and cover and the first chapter or two. There was one book I picked up a couple of years ago in which the hero was a sexual athlete from the future. He participated in Olympic-like events to bring as many women to orgasm as fast as he could. He goes on vacation by traveling back in time to the present day whereupon he meets the heroine. Now guess what? There were NO sex scenes in the entire book. Without it, the story fell flat for me and I didn't finish it. I did scan thru it looking for the payoff, but there was none.
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