Lieam's Horrible Exprience. reviews

Alright.. I'm not saying the story sucked, but that it a bit too harsh. If you are gonna make a part two try getting someway for her to get back at them or something. Rapes not the highest thing for me, guess i'm old fashion... If the author reads this, he can email me and maybe I could give him some ideas for her revenge.. Alright.. that's all I have to say...

The story was great, but you should've made Jeremy and Karen twins and Lieam the little sister of both. As far as it being a "harsh" story, there has been FAR more brutal ones than this. But yes it was a definite turn-on.

Obviously somebody is into this, but it's not me. Rape of this poor sweet girl who did nothing to deserve this and it seems it heralds only the beginning of hell for her. No escape, just further torture. All that humiliation and not one person to help her. There was too much evil, too much horror in this for me. Way too harsh.

i really liked this story please write a nother to this one