Kevin and my sister reviews

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Not a bad start. Lots of grammatical errors, and lack of varied adjectives. Keep working on your writing. And thanks for this read.

this story is amazin!! u have to write more!!

Wow, that was a fantastic story. I havent read a story that short and that good in a long time. Thank you for having this website and i will be back to read more often

Great subject, needed more... sexual scenes...but a good read. Thanks.