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Posted by m

terribly written, don't waste your time writing another one.

Posted by Disgusted

Egad! I haven't seen that many run-on sentences since the second grade! Take M's advice. No more, please. Not until you've taken some English courses.

Posted by crystal

I agree. I only read the first 3 paragraphs then stopped. It went on and on and on. Try using speech marks in future to seperate the speaking from the actual story.

Posted by Robin

Yo, man your story was great. But there is one thing, in like the second paragraph you started talking about Ken but then you go to this guy named Peter? I don't get it?

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