John's First gay ex reviews
terribly written, don't waste your time writing another one.
Egad! I haven't seen that many run-on sentences since the second grade! Take M's advice. No more, please. Not until you've taken some English courses.
I agree. I only read the first 3 paragraphs then stopped. It went on and on and on. Try using speech marks in future to seperate the speaking from the actual story.
Yo, man your story was great. But there is one thing, in like the second paragraph you started talking about Ken but then you go to this guy named Peter? I don't get it?
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Her enjoyment aroused me as well. Her hips rolled on my fingers and face as the nectar from her orgasm descends from her pussy and down my chin and fingers. I stuck my fingers into my mouth to suck off her sweet sensation. Note: I have reposted all of my Sharing Black stories so that they all can be on one authors profile. Some of the names have been changed but the story is still the same... |
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