Jessica and Jonathan losing their virginity. reviews

An amazing story. I give it a 5 out of 5. The writing was perfect. I loved how you didn't rush into the sex and let the reader antisipate the love. Most writers on this site do not emphasize actual love and write things like "As soon as I saw her/him we ran into a room and we fucked", but you are different. You let the reader see the blossom of the two lovers and the story never felt rushed or sleezy. I enjoyed the use of many, many adjectives and your interesting metaphors. I hope to see more stories from you.

I agree that it was much better than the other shit you get around here which is unrealistic and is all about fucking.

Not a bad story. But your a fucked up momma if you liked watching your daughter getthe shit fucked out of her.

A very well written story. The author did a very good job.

This was an amazing story, great job. Probably one of the best stories I've ever read.

o my frickin god this story was soooo HOT OMG!!!!! i have never goten off like tat before now i cant wait to fall inlove and hold off our first time untill she is ready and then we go at it. this story was by far THE BEST story i have read and i have read almost all the storys on here

i love the story. it's doesn't only talk about sex but it shows the power of love. amazing story.

wow, that was the greatest sex story i have ever read in my whole life so much detail it was great you could be an author!

This has got to be the most beautiful story on here. Romantic, slow building, great character development, lots of thought and when it came, incredible mind blowing sex. Ten out of ten.

this was the most amazing story. it is kind of weird that your the one who wrote it considering your her mum. but never the less amazing. this is the best story i have ever read

wow, amazing, what a sexy story. omg it was so romantic as well as sexy. i loved it. ten out of ten

wow, great story, full of romance leading to beautiful sex. its the best story i have read on here

i liked your story alot. one qeustion is your daughter still a house wife or did she go back to work yet?

fucking awsome! BUT A CUCUMBER WHO JACKS W/ A CUCUMBER.... LOL

Well Carol Melland, I often sometimes hope to be blessed like these two love birds. But all too often I meet girls that have already been with other guys. Plus I have to admit I have made love to a girl but only once. So that casts me out of being an "innocence" man. But I'm now waiting for the one girl to REALLY fall in love with. If I made it to 22 years of age I can wait til 40 if I have to. I want to have what these guys had and still have.

i'm so moved with the story, how much they value the gift they could give to there partners. That patience really pays off! Some people tried sex for experience but they miss the point that sex should be enjoyed by two people in love. I'm really inspired by the story most specially the part that they are happily married. I wish them all the best and their happy love stories continues! THE BEST STORY I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR

few stories have made me feel as horny as this one, its romantic, sexy and everything a good love story should eb. keep it up

Fabulous, romantic and so sexual.Hardly has a story made me so borny.

Io bed this tender love story

You so make a movie this is a lovely story. I hope the marrage is the same or more as the courtship!

Am in love with you guys