Intrepid - Part One reviews

Great story, would be interesting to find out what happens in both your stories!

great story, and hopefully soon a part two!

one of the best stories I have ever read

kick ass story, I can't wait till the sequal

Wonderfull no doubt ...can't wait for the sequal either .. Its real. That's important i think to keep it real to make us think that it can happen .. verry good ..

Five stars, two thumbs up, excellent, excellent, excellent. By far the best story I've read in a long time. Can't wait for the sequel.

Great plot! The best I've read in a long time. I'm dying to read the seqeul. I have twin sisters and my best male friend and I are often mistaken for twins so this one hit close to home. Thanks Will!

I really can not wait till part two, VERY good story

This story had a very good development building up to the juicy shower action! The ending left for a really good sequal because it left me hanging on the edge. Made me feel like the guy left alone in the shower in the dark with the water dripping over me.!

Excellent story. Good character development. Beautifully told.

Great story takes your mind and body and puts you there.

Nice man! I think there should defenently be more stories written like this. You'r a pretty good writer man, I would love to read another one of your stories.

great story....loved it...but when are you going to make part 2?...i really want to know what happens...

that story gave me one of the best orgasms ever..thanks, and i hope you come out with pt. 2 reeeealy soon....ciao amour

really loved it. great story and agreat hard on

Part 2!!! Part 2!!!!

This is one of the best stories I have read in an extremely long time.. Not only was in incredibly hot, it was also very sensual and emotional.... It really made me miss my sister... I can't wait to see what happens next. You did an amazing job!!