I think that the story had a very wonderful point. I am also a lesbian, but didn't come out until I met the LOVE OF MY LIFE. I tried to ignore it at first, but I couldn't handle the thought of not being with her and being true to my feelings. I don't know how to describe it. From the moment I met her she has lite up my LIFE. Reading this story made me feel like I could take her in my arms and never let her go. Thank You So Much.
Posted by Erin
Wow. Your a really good writer. You can definatly tell that. It stands out in the story. Your really real and i love it. Write more. Oh and awsome taste in music.
Posted by New Writer
Thanks for the feedback...I've submitted some small modifications to this story...added one more scene...it'll probably be updated soon. And yes, I've got another story going on...this one is set in India.
Posted by Cheryl
Keep up the good work new writer. Would like to read your next story. Hope it is as good as this one was. This story was very interesting and like I said before it was wonderfuly put together.
Posted by Kevin
Sounds like I'm the only guy to give your story a review.I loved it.Of course I'm turned on by lesbian sex,but no matter the content of the story,it is up to the writer to entertain and arouse the reader.I sense that sexually arousing your readers was not your point.I was fascinated with the Jodie and Karen and their sweet and sometimes stormy relationship.Your story was a wonderful change from the raw carnality of many of stories on this site.Yeah,I'm a guy but I appreciate writing skills,and you are simply terrific.Thanks,Kevin
Posted by Liz
that's awesome. sorry my browser kept sending my messages- damned issue with that. I can't wait for your next story. great job!!!
Posted by Jay
hi. I want to add with all the other comments that your story was off the hook. Seriously. I am wide read in these types of stories and i know a good one when i read it. I am straight, BUT, i think i may be bi, but hey, if i ever make the move or someone special finds me, i hope my relationship is as passionate as Jodie and Karen.
Posted by DropN
Fantastic story! Very realistic. As young lesbian it gives me hope. Thanks for writing this story.
Posted by am
That was such an excellent story, i am able to relate to many parts in that story and it just brings back good memories. so thank you for that.
Posted by Reader
Way to go girl. If I were you, I would take a bit more time on the thier first "brush" , cutt out thier "making out" a little bit, and make a movie out of it. Sure it wont be "Streets of phelidelphia" but defninitly a good one. This aint no sex story this is art. keep on writing. I will look out for more work from you. Thanx and good luck.
Posted by gabriel
you should write a book....or a lot of books....quickly, so i can buy absolutely all of them! that story was fucking awesome, i don't think i've ever read a better-stated, more emotionally involved piece. gorgeous blend of the erotic and the day-to-day...and by the way, your music taste is fabulous. good luck to you!
Posted by Robin
We need MORE stories like that on this site! Absolutely realistic and touching!
Posted by Amat
thank you for this wonderful down to earth story. It's a nice change. The music is awesome.
Posted by atruefan
wow, u r amazing. seriously, wow. i love the way you let music help tell the story, i myself play several instruments and am in a jazz band cuz i love n e upbeat, feel good music that, like jazz, just lifts you. chart toppers will come and go, but the true hits will live forever, and god, so will this story...
Posted by sum1
dat was pretty dam gud 2..o yea..and about de endin...well i got 4 words for dat 1..dat u've mentioned in u'r other 1..lol'z.."fuk the status quo"!!!!!!!!!!!...o yea..and i'm guessin aapko ye tho bolna aata hai na?..tho phir..aap hai kha sai?..hope ya get dat..o yea and i figure u wun't say here..so..hmm..drop me a clue..sumwhere..yea can't wait 4 u'r nxt 1..l8rz.. new writer
Posted by Chris
Great story! Very interesting and well-written. Plus, your grammar is really good, which makes reading your story all the more enjoyable. I hope you write again soon.
Posted by Karen
I just wanted to say I love this story and that it made me think about gay life and how it feels for most people. Thanks for a great story.
Posted by JoEllen
WOW, now that was a great story. sorry that things happened the way they did but that is life.
Posted by Susan
loved your story...it was great..very emotional, sensual and loving....
Posted by Aimus
oh wow. i feel exactly like jo right now. i can't imagine a story as incredible as the one i've just read. i cried man...and i never cry! this is really, truely, great and i can't thank you enough for writing it.
Posted by Amber
That was great! Thats a great story!
Posted by christin alexis
Please do a part 2 to this story its really cool to somewhat see like unfold through story.This was great!!
Posted by Hannah
Wow wat a great story...I was moved...
Posted by Ourfirstkisledtothis
I like this one a lot...Most of these stories go right into bumpin and grindin I am so into the story line...So yeah perfect keep it up I want to know more..
Posted by Daniel
Well, as it shows above, I still haven't found a way of contacting you, but I still love your stories after years of reading and re-reading and re-re-reading them! I gave the URL to a forum I frequent and am trying to get other readers to take a look at your works. I know they'll love it if they take the initiative.
Posted by Elizabeth Smyth
I loved this story- one of the few well written ones on here. Sorry it took me so long to say so. As a published writer myself I have to say that there were parts of it that were truely eloquent, the characters were engageing and had a lovely bitter-sweet ending. Very well done!
Posted by Gary Marley
NIce love Story.
Posted by diamond
omg i love it
Posted by Alana
This was amazing. Absolutely loved it. It's these types of stories, the ones that isn't all about sex, but about feeling, and making love, these stories are what drives me to wait for the perfect girlfriend for me.
Posted by Longchamp
A few things i have seen in terms of computer memory is the fact that there are specs such as SDRAM, DDR etc, that must match the specs of the mother board. If the pc's motherboard is fairly current and there are no computer OS issues, replacing the memory space literally normally requires under an hour or so. It's among the easiest computer upgrade methods one can visualize. Thanks for discussing your ideas.
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Hello! Do you know if they make any plugins to protect against hackers? I'm kinda paranoid about losing everything I've worked hard on. Any tips?
Posted by Camryn
PLEASE keep going with this story! It's soooooooo perfect!! I'm on edge right now. BEST story I have ever read!!
Posted by yhgasdqelp
Muchas gracias. ?Como puedo iniciar sesion?
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