High School Hell : Part 1 reviews

this was a very good story, I enjoy reading the stories you write although, i wish you would write a third addition to you other 2 stories. those were the best ive ever read.

This was a GREAT story. I agree with Brian, I also wish you would write a thrid addition to your other stories. As for this story, please keep it alive, I really liked it.

Thanks for all the comments guys. Definitely will keep up the writing. I will consider adding to my first series since you all seem to like it. Lucas if youlike I can send the next story to you before i submit it and you can proof it as well. There is definitely a part two coming in a couple weeks. Thanks, E mail me any time

Awesome. Definitely like your writing style, but I agree with the others when I say that the grammar mistakes take away from the clarity of the story. You're a very smooth writer otherwise and your dedication to good plot is a great asset. Keep it up.

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Great story, waiting for the sequel or sequels.

Hey girl. This piece was very...hmmm...whats the word...well actually there are a few...It was, passionate...exotic...and overall SEXY. I loved it girl and I give it a 9. Ima read part 2 and I'll send you another review!

Wow...What a great story! Both 1 and 2. It is giving me the courage to come out to my parents. You definately have a talent. Not too much sex but very sexy.

Great story you must really love her and a can respect that although ima guy so i hope u guys send the rest of yall lifes 2 gether

Awwww!! I LOVE this story. It's the best i've read so far!

I just read your story and it was great!! I'm definitely gonna read the sequel!! I love the story doesn't always talk about sex,but there is a love story as well!!!