Gander, My brother earned the name,we used it. reviews

Pick it up and run with it Laverne, This sounds like a mini-seires in the making. Next time develope your siblings characture more So we can Identify with them.Thank's for the lack of curse words. I never use them nor do I appreaciate them in my presents. I have lived a wild life ,but my first lovers were those who needed me to show them HOW_WHO _WHEN. BUT!Dad didn't fall into my lair until he was forty two and I was twenty four.

Super stuff, girl! Keep it up and search for some redeaming value in your heroine you got a paper back contract. Call Gronaugh publishing St Louis MO.

I like the idea of the story but it is very hard to follow. Everything is kinda mixed up like trying to tell more than one story at a time. Some writing classes might help.