First Experience reviews

Thank you everyone for your advice and kind words to my writing. I will be sure to include it in my new work!

That was an amazing story. I thought it was great! And ya, a bit more dialogue would have helped, other wise, this is one of the best I've read on here in a long time.

oh goood

Whoa, tnihgs just got a whole lot easier.

That's really thinking at an ipmerssive level

One or two to reembemr, that is.