Fear of Falling...In Love reviews

Too much of this waiting BS- obviously written from a more conventional viewpoint, by a woman of that mindset. Sex is not always about love- just look at the animal kingdom. It doesn't have to be "perfect" moment. Anyway, if a girl doesn't put out, in my book, she IS a tease! If that makes me a jerk- so be it!

A massive effort -- nice job.

Great story. I loved it. The BS severusmax calls it, that was the best part.

Hey, I thought it was one of the best stories that I have ever read on here. I think it is a really great story. All of the so-called BS, I thought it was what made the story. The protective sister, all of the time leading up to the Climax. This is a story that could be used as a guide to show that true love can come in the strangest forms. The author really put alot of work into this story and I am really thankful for it. Keep them coming. I'd also like to see what else happens in Shane's stay with is sister.

Look, I didn't mean to be harsh, but I just have no use for abstinence, monogamy, or conventional, bourgeois morality. I know that those things seem "romantic" to other people, but to me they're irrational. However, to balance the negative, I should add that I agree with Skipper about one thing- the sister caring about her brother and her best friend was cool- I am certainly as protective of my siblings, in wanting them to be happy!

AMAZING story!! I think this was the best story i have ever read. It wasnt the most erotic story ever, but the quality of the writing, the characters, and the plot, everything was just awesome! with wrting skills like this, you should think about writing a book or something!

great story I like it alot I hope you can do another chapter one it it was great