Falling Stars reviews

Well done and erotic.

OMG! This story makes me wish my first time was better! lol. You are soo great at this. Keep going!

i got so wet reading this i just had to finger myself

A touching story, but scientifically inaccurate, as this time of the month, if I recall correctly is know as "ovulation", when a girl is definitely fertile!

Anyway, I should add that it was quite descriptive, not to mention sensual, because you could just imagine how the water of the pool would make everything feel smoother and slicker, which is sheer tactile pleasure. Definitely the best way to lose it!

Nice story...it was real sweet. Made me think of the guys I used to obssess over in middle school AND high school.

extreme dreams I like it very much.

Nice story. Very visual. Nicely written. As far as the wrong time of the month that came up, this was about a young naive girl.

cute little story you should a part 2 just a thought

It is very intersting for reading.if you are student till now i think you can be a good story teller

So sweet... I cried alittle thinking about my first time... Erm good job.

How neat! Is it really this sipmle? You make it look easy.