Darren reviews
Excellent story. Very artistic in it's format and language. I like the lacing of God through out, the reoccuring presence of water in the seduction of both boys, but mostly the fact that you didn't gorge on too many slangy words. Such writing is rather encouraging to find.
Very nice, well-written story. I absolutely love it! It was a bit odd though, it's like they were in the pool then it suddenly switchd to the bedroom.
Very difficult to follow the story, kept switching scenes ... would have been better to follow in specific order
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Andie stood towering over her two little fems, as they lay there in shock from the vicious attack perpetrated by the big fat dildo between the doms sturdy legs, and seeing how Shawna was completely out of it, the bull grabbed Erin by the hair and dragged her head over to her crotch and gave the order, "Eat my fucking muffy, little bitch, and you'd better do a good job of it or I'm gonna use may cock up your fucking ass!!!"... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting