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Caught in the act : Mickey reviews

Posted by Doug
Please, Please, Please learn how to use something other than an exclamation mark for punctuation!!! They are to be used to show surprise or excitement, not merely to end a sentence. It's almost as if you are hollering your entire story. The content is good, and I enjoy your stories, but please learn how to punctuate.
Posted by Simon
AKAKAKAKA
Posted by Mark
Boring
Posted by Millsy
excellent
Posted by oli
i liked it
Posted by none of youre buisness
It's ok, but just ok. ok ?
Posted by fsdfsf
i liked it
Posted by Trixxx
A pretty good story .. only a few spelling mistakes, but good! Nice story!
Posted by Romit
Best story. Good.
Posted by bonquisha
Kay den
Posted by dev
gud
Posted by Anonymous
lolwut
Posted by Harry Jay
Extremely badly written. Has no one ever taught you how to punctuate? It's a revolting story anyway. Give me the young "flat chested" girls in the shower room anyday!
Posted by Budaaa
Ni mbaya mbofu.
Posted by Latasha
Your website has to be the eltenrocic Swiss army knife for this topic.
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