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Bonfire reviews

Posted by QuartzOrb
Sexy! I liked how she not only went to the beach in search of conventional fun, but was also open to getting herself lucky if she could manage it. It could use some more detail as well as a few more characters to round it all out. But, a great first attempt.
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