Being good to neighbours! reviews
The big problem is punctuation, then there is the bad spelling and usage. Give the readers a break and writer properly so that they don't need to struggle to get through the story.
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There, on the bed was Ryan, lying on his back naked, his girlfriend on top of him, dangling her breasts above his mouth with her perfect round ass up in the air. I panicked. I dropped my books and they both looked over at me. "I.. the door.. I'm sorry!" I stammered, turning to leave... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting