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Simply superb. Every dialogue and scenes are full of romance, excitement and sex appeal.

More than superb! Perhaps this is the best story written by Shanyashi.

It would be better if the English was better. There are to many misused words.

I agree with Rob but plot was hot.

I love indian sex stories. Indian peoples talk too much before fucking session. Those are hot. I'm gonna read all from this author. Thanks.

Wonderful!

Wonderful and Great

The English is so bad that I didn't even make it past the first paragraph! Why waste your time? Pus, it is totally incoherent as it dosen't flow but jumps around.

Indian people always make things romantic rather than commercial fucking. However, what a fantastic story it is! Thanks Shanyashi. Which forest or cave do you live? I like to meet you.

interesting..

GOOD STORY

Wow! What a story!

Good story. I like to read.

Excellent.

Excellent

A very good Indian story.

Wonderful!!!

great story ................

Are indian boys fuck teachers? Not bad at all.

good story

I cnaont tell a lie, that really helped.

Holy shiinzt, this is so cool thank you.

Alright arglhit alright that's exactly what I needed!

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Consent to all of you!

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