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Posted by Carlos Ku

Hey Gabriel, nice one. However, I rather the girl doesn't have such a large breast. I've heard that guys nowadays don't like girls with big tits. A long hair, ponnytail, short and petite girl is perfect enough. Alright? Keep writing. Good work in general.

Posted by Bill

good to whack off too

Posted by matt

i really liked your story great detail cant wait tell the next one

Posted by ALyssa

i like it. it was very discriptive. you should deffinetly do another chapter. i got very hory while reading this.

Posted by Ronnie

liked the story. do you have liz's sister yet?

Posted by Steve

Would love to read more i was left hanging and wante to read mroe

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