Beach babes reviews

Fucking aweful story. Sentences are choppy and story has no erotic feel at all. Not worth reading.

was this true

this story suck pussies..it didn't make me horny or anything! you should learn how to right before u publish another story..no details or description at all

Oh my God, Catherine! I was going to hate on this but I decided to love it once I saw that you hated it too. You are always stealing my stuff!

Chelsey, you are so immature. I'm telling Mom that you were looking at lesbian stories on the computer.

The story was good but, it kind of ran together. Sometimes I couldn't tell who was doing who. Its all good for your first time out. Keep up the good work

I love it very much do you have any more stories with the 4 of you. Have a teacher got into your pants as well and was the landlord a female to.

oh my fucking god

your story sucked really bad.

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NOW THATS WHAT I CALL HAVING GREAT ROOMATES LOL...LOVED THE STORY ...I THOUGHT I WAS ONLY ONE WHO KNEW WHAT GREAT SEX WAS BETWEEN WOMEN LOL BUT WELCOM TO THE CLUB AND WRITE MORE LESBIAN STORIES BABY...IT WAS MMMMMMMMM GOOD LOL

THIS WAS NOT ABOUT THE WRITIBG OR WHAT EVER U HATERS DIDNT LIKE ..IT WAS A HOT WOMENS STORY ...WHO CARES ABOUT REST OF COMPLANTS LOL...IT DID ITS JOB SEX,WOMEN,SEX AND TOYS AND DID I SAY HOT SEX LOL...DONT WORRIE ABOUT THE HATERS LOL KEEP UP GOOD WORK

This is so hot my gf is fucking meto her big juicy boobs

do u want my cum tessa

You need to make the story interesting to read. Giant paragraphs are annoying and nobody wants to read them.