Ashlee's first reviews

not bad for a beginner.

Great start...waiting to see what happens next.

great first time story especially coming from a womans point of view !! tell us more,you seem to have talent and show great promise!

Great story keep them cuming!

hye its awesome cant wait for more from ya plz make some more soon so hot!!!!!!!

Though it is unlikely you will read this, I find your story very interesting and await more of your experiences/fantacies!

that was a very good first story i will be looking forward to more iam just starting my first story about my daughter and me look for it, it is a true story.

love your story, wish I was Michael

Cute, sad and sexy.

Hey that isn't bad keep up the good work.

wonderful story, wish i was there to make u come and come all night. please write to me as i love to chat about sex and love to make your fantasies come true

excellent story. Write one with two guys and u or two woman. tks. Keep it up

HOT!

loved it ... blew a large load ...

mmm, very hot. good job and hope to read more

Great story, love to read more of your adventures.

Really good cant wait to read what happens next