this story is excellent, well thought out, and well organized. interesting plot set up.love the mythology references! keep writing...
Posted by j'mbeaucoup
seriously, one of the best pieces I have ever read on this site. I appreciate what you've done here!
Posted by ma
Great story! I wish it was a bit longer though, it was just starting to get REALLY good then it ended...
Posted by Mister Dickman
Real hot, you should keep story going.
Posted by sam
reality and fantasy both entangled and fusion blow,I liked it man the ending you are mine.That's what I want a man of mine.To the author,keep writing,and wish you write a classic gaymale story.
Posted by Galina
It's tough being such a thinker, isn't it? I used to over think eviyrtheng.Now I just think. I always want to know why. Then the why becomes it must be me . My homework every day is to think about something else. I might be driving and decide instead of getting into that thinking that this is the same old road, yawn yawn yawn, that I will look to find something else along that road to think about .to notice something I have never seen before. I could have been at that stop light thousands of times, but now I purposely seek out something new. It's amazing what you find. Then it becomes a challenge each time I get to that light. I've had a lot of fun doing this. Today I saw an old barn that has had its roof caved in. Now I had to work out why did that happen ..when did this happen .did I miss it all the times I have driven past?I feel our minds are the most powerful instrument we have. We can change our thoughts .we can change our thinking we can stop the same o same o we can turn negative into positive we can brain wash ourselves. I do know what you mean about the birthday video.I've had many times where I have done something special for others and gotten nothing in return. I realized not that long ago that that's the way I am, to do things for others. Most people don't know how to do that. WE that give are the gifted ones. WE make the choice to do it for others. The last time I ever felt special on my birthday was when I was a kid. But that's okay. The people in my life don't like birthdays so mine is nothing to them. I cannot expect them to understand and it's okay. It's who I am to make them feel special. That makes me special.Love you Steve .xoxox
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