An Incestous Family reviews

Hopefully, we will read about the sister AFTER this author learns how to spell and punctuate. A fair first effort, but Sparrow should look at the styles used in other good stories before writing more.

I agree with LucOuarm, the spelling and grammar in this story are terrible. I couldn't even stand to read past the first paragraph.

Lovely story, I remember being young and wanting to be grown up. The man next door to us was always nice to me and one day as I just turned thirteen he invited me over to his swimming pool. My breasts were to large for the bikini I had on and when I dove in off came my top. I saw Tom with my top and I swam over to him. As I got close I noticed that he did not have his trunks on so I thought why not and I took off my bottoms. When I got close he circled his arms around me and I felt his cock at the entrance of my cunt. He carried me to the shallow end and I wrapped my legs around him as I felt his cock trying to enter me. I relaxed as his cock went into me and he came right away but he stayed hard. He climbed the ladder with his cock still in me and took me into his home and we laid down on his sofa were he proceeded to fuck me. He came in me again and we fell asleep. Some time later as we awoke he fucked me again and I just knew that i would miss my next period. I did and nine months later I had twins a boy and a girl.

Hot story, I was several years older than the boy that I baby sat for. During the day we played together and on week-ends I sat for his mother while she worked. I was sixteen barely five foot with very large breasts and he was twelve have shot up to nearly seven foot this past year. We were swimming in the pool the afternoon that everything would change between us. I do not know what happen to me but I remember calling for help and he was right there. He grabed me and pulled me to the shallow end and then out of the pool. He later told me that he was not sure if I had drown or passed out but when I awoke he was blowing air into my mouth. I threw my arms around him thanking him for saving my life and he carried me into his home. He wanted to call someone to make sure that I was ok but I told him that I was and not to worry. That night as he got ready for bed I also got undressed with him and told his that I wanted to give him something for saving me. I knew that I was fertile but I did not care and as we made love that night I was sure that I would miss my next period which I did. The following year I gave birth to four lovely daughters. We had two more set of twins as he finished highschool at sixteen. We married two years later and I looked out of sorts being eight months pregnant at the time.