A sunday at daddys reviews

Sorry,this story is too short and should have more foreplay. I think the way to get a negative review is for a writer to to pen a story either too short,or way too long. If the story is long,then it the writer needs to keep the character's interesting and the sex hot.You are on the right track,maybe you could write a story involving a young girl seducing a happily married man when mommy is away.I would read it.

A lot of spacing problems make the story hard to read and confused the dialogue. The story itself was not bad, but the format needs more work.

5mZaoS Can be also this issue because the truth can be achieved only in a dispute :D

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